Introduction
Hey what’s up!!!
As I told you before, I am a feeling extrovert person who love these following words – presiding, motivating, enhancing, pepping up, influencing, coloring, extending, and risk taking. It can be stated openly that those words are indeed my latent talents or commonly-know as prowess.
It can be simplefied that I have the same character as the ‘sponge’ does, I am really sure you will ask me, how come? Isn’t it? Ok... no more courteus, but firstly I will be right back after the commercial break. hehehe. I scare if my freak explanations’re gonna kill you.... are you ready?
Sponge-man means that I have a blind acceptance of someone statement although it is true or not. In the other hand, I usualy tend to be a good listener, however it is true that I strongly dislike with the word of denial although physicly I enjoy both the dialogue and listening to the talk, actuality I am very determined to defend my statement. I have a great care in everyone problem although sometime show ignorance about every single person problem. This is the matter that I realize fully about myself that I always have my personal mission, though too fast to give up when faced up an inhibition. Failed in one place I decide to create a new mission, in the other hand, I am a capriceman-inconsistence man.
Other things about me that travelling is the middle of my name means that I enjoy in bustling myself both to travel and face something new-activity, people, as well as situation. The following list is a few of my own life experiences which are very exiting to be read:
(will be published as soon as possible)
1. As I told you before, I am a feeling extrovert person (Clausa pertama menggunakan bentuk Past, serharusnya diikuti Past atau Past Perfect, kalo mau bentuk Present, clausa pertama serharusnya menggunakan Present Perfect – As I’ve told you before, …….)
BalasHapus2. I am a feeling extrovert person who love (Person adalah orang ketiga jadi harusnya Loves bukan love)
3. It can be simplefied that I have the same character (Character = tokoh, maksudnya characteristics kali ya …)
4. I am really sure you will ask me, how come? Isn’t it? (question tag untuk I am,adalah aren’t I? bukan Isn’t it? )
5. I scare if my freak explanations’re gonna kill you (scare = menakut-nakuti, harusnya menggunakan I’m scared/ frightened/ afraid artinya takut)
6. actuality I am very determined to defend my statement. (actuality atau actually? Atau maksudnya in fact? In reality?)
7. I have a great care in everyone problem (care in =perawatan dalam, care about= peduli )
8. though too fast to give up when faced up an inhibition. (Subjectnya mana? Setelah though harus ada subject baru)
9. Failed in one place I decide to create a new mission, (Failed bukan Noun, ganti dengan failure)
10. Other things about me that travelling is the middle of my name means …… (to benya ‘are’ bukan ‘is’cos other things jamak)
11. The following list is a few of my own life experiences which are very exiting to be read (seharusnya…. which are very exiting to read, dalam bahasa inggris biasanya menggunakan dalam bentuk aktif,seperti: it’s hard to explain, it’s difficult to do, it’s easy to carry )
wah wah wah specchless aku..hehe ... gak lulus dech writing ku..
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